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Hey, dear
It's crystal clear
That you should be right here
Hey, hey
This is where we ought to be
Hey, smile
It's been a while
Since you came out for a while
Hey, hey
This is who I want to see
She's all I want
All I need
She's everything
I cannot be
Hey, hey
I can almost see you
Hey, hey
I can almost see you...
It's crystal clear
That you should be right here
Hey, hey
This is where we ought to be
Hey, smile
It's been a while
Since you came out for a while
Hey, hey
This is who I want to see
She's all I want
All I need
She's everything
I cannot be
Hey, hey
I can almost see you
Hey, hey
I can almost see you...
There was once this chance to share the world with just one girl...
© 2009 - 2024 ron-brouillette
Comments5
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And without you my thoughts compile
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So come out it's all worthwhile
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i love this poem!--its really sweet and caring and i dont know, i love it
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---------the 8th line though, i think its stanza 3---i think it just sounds better if you didnt use "while" twice... i would write a critique but i dont have a subscribtion so i put my thoughts up top
.
And without you my thoughts compile
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So come out it's all worthwhile
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i love this poem!--its really sweet and caring and i dont know, i love it
. ---------the 8th line though, i think its stanza 3---i think it just sounds better if you didnt use "while" twice... i would write a critique but i dont have a subscribtion so i put my thoughts up top
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